My father is really great!! I really love my father because he is the one who gave life to me in this world. His attitudes are really the one I'm always looking for. I can't say in words how glad I am to be his son. From his attitudes, I could say that he is really a great father. First and foremost, I could say that he has been a great father to us. He changes as the situation changes. I can say that he is not so strict but not also to loose in guiding us. He is humorous most of the time. He even makes dull moments gay!! At sometimes, he gets really serious at some situations. When it comes to religion, he doesn't joke. I know my father as the funny person but my view of him changes immediately when we talk about religion. Unlike my mother, my father is not that strict. He understands me better compared to my mother.
I love both of my parents. I love them evenly because I know that they are my guide in fulfilling my dreams.
I love both of my parents. I love them evenly because I know that they are my guide in fulfilling my dreams.
-nobie478-
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2 comments:
nice composition but I think some improvements in your starting sentences would be necessary.
donchu think "my guide in life would be better?
I like the part where you stated that your father's mood changes as that of the situation because I think that is a commonality between our fathers.
nice blog
just keep on publishing everything
everything is good, just make sure keep your sentence/statements, simple and short
also change your text color to a more readable one so that it will not conflict with the background color ayt ^_^
im sure this will be a good blog that you could share for everyone including your audition pals
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